Friday, March 24, 2006

Whirling Wind

I sit in the dark........

I hear the wind blowing......

It hugs my house....... I know it is hoping
To find a slit through which it can ooze and sing
To me
Its Anthem of Truths

Oh! Woo me whirling wind of the ages!

Persuade me with the wisdom of sages!

And I will fly with you through the night
Through the sky......
....Till the world
.....Is washed
.....With Light


SusieQ


9 comments:

  1. You're a very good poet Susie! That made me smile and that's been hard to accomplish as of late. Thank you.

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  2. Thanks, Jenni. I wrote this particular poem about 20 years ago. My, how time flies. It seems like only yesterday. I was never happy with the final line though. When I was preparing this poem for my blog, I ended up changing the final line and now I feel the poem is complete and says what I had in mind.

    I have always loved the sound and action of the wind. Even though it can be destructive at times, its power is somehow beautiful to me.

    I hope that very soon you will be able to smile with little provocation.

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  3. Love the imagery of the wind hugging your house....

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  4. I like this poem very much. It clearly reflects the person I have
    known and appreciated for so long.

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  5. Susie,

    Just want to say hello, and wish you and your loved ones a Happy spring and Easter!

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